Even though the story is finished for this year, i am still getting submitting in which are simply too good quality not to use.
First up is returning friend Ananya S Guha who offers this excellent poem 'Uncle's Ghost'.
He sat Buddha like
shaven, ashen
he sat otiose, no looks
moribund, but sitting.
Me thirteen
me in myths and shrouds
me who knew ghosts
but hadn't met
me me me.
My eyes became a traffic snarl
I hid under the blanket
unmoved he stared, meditative
smiling, almost laughing
after all Buddha like
my first incursion to prayer,
sleep and oblivious meditation.
Buddha like. Ghost? Buddha was
dead centuries ago.
But now this Buddha, terrible, smiling
sitting at my supine feet. Incantation.
My anthropological uncle in
one of his excavations- digging!
Ghost Story II (Napwrimo 2015)
Friday, 19 June 2015
Thursday, 30 April 2015
Part XXX Part A and B and guest poet 18 - Jeffarama!
(Last two pieces today. It's been a long
and eventful journey but has become apparent
to myself over the past few days that this story
is not over and hopefully health permitting,
there will indeed be a Ghost Story Part III
next month.
As a special afterthought which may lead into
Part III, my special buddy Jeffarama! (http://www.writeoutloud.net/profiles/jeffarama!)
has done a alternative ending
In the meantime, thanks for reading)
XXX (A)
Creating
a breaking sound
Your
words of agreement
Was
almost overturned
Then
unpacked
Into
the boot of a car
Blowing
on panes of glass
Resurrecting
itself
In
a verbal affirmation
Of
the truth
Translated
into a slight tear
‘It’s
only going
to
get worse
He
was just the first’
Vanishing
down the staircase
With
me in tow.
XXX (B)
Vanishing
across railway dust
Tranmissing
effects
Into
hand held mysteries
Shooting
down hopes
Freckled
into spots
Migrating
into different towns
Kicking
through other doors
She
said it was only going
To
get worse
Before
we even got
Down
the staircase
And
a few dozen deaths
Was
nothing to what was going
To
happen next
Shifting
answers
Into
another adventures
Before
surfacing again
At
the beginning of
Another
story.
Don't think that's the end of the matter...
Ironic really
the headline said it all
'Innocent commuters massacred'
Ironic as it was on the paper stall
outside the station
the atrocities happened
Not even a natural disaster
no, that may have been acceptable
but as usual, a complete waste,
a senseless loss of innocent life
What gives you the right?
to take my life
to cut me down in my prime
to dictate the day that I die...
I hope you get
everything you deserve
although it's nothing compared
to what I have in mind
Remember to watch your back
for the rest of your life
if you think you're being watched
those eyes are mine
My soul won't rest
Until I track you both down.
Jeff Dawson April 2015
Wednesday, 29 April 2015
Part XVIX A and B
(As said yesterday, in a attempt to keep this down to just April
I am now writing two poems a day.
The poems today follow straight on from Part 28.
Can you wait until the conclusion tomorrow? (with a special
epilogue wrote by our last guest poet too)
XXVIX (A)
Shut
close
Those
words followed me
Cresting
over the balcony
Into
a muffled deadness
Shelved
into blurred lights
With
his face staring
Into
my eyes
All
the way down
Thirsting
for blood
Leaving
footprint
After
footprint
In
my memory
Cutting
through my relief
With
an axe
Slipping
away
In
a broken lullaby.
XXVIX (B)
Ripping
up the tension
You
would have kissed me
If
you could and told me
I’d
be okay
Threading
away my pain
And
the blood
All
over my ripped jeans
And
trainers
Thickened
in
A
sharp transfer
Seeping
through
Drenched
in passion
As
much as
A
lingering sense of guilt.
Tuesday, 28 April 2015
Part XXVIII Part A and B and Guest Poet 17 Stormy Gail Dormire - Approaching Station 12
(The people who know me better may remember
it's my birthday today but still no stopping me
on Napwrimo. As previously hinted, there will
be extra pieces to help me finish off the story
and I can now confirm from today for the last three
days, there will two poems per day. Talk about
making life harder for myself - lol. Today's poem
is Andy with the killer finally meeting)
(Also included is our latest guest poem from Stormy Gail Dormire
who offers Approaching Station 12 directly set in this world)
XVIII (A)
Broken into pieces
He
pumped shell after shell
Into
the spaces
Round
the doorarch
Above
me
Spraying
it so much
It
looked like
He
was redecorating
Rather
than trying to kill me
Screaming
‘Die, Die, Die’
With
such force
It
sounded like
He
was trying to will me
To
death
When
the bullets didn’t
Losing
the thrill
When
he kept pumping
Them
out
And
none of them hit me
Before
proclaiming
Eventually
‘How?’
‘I’m
not sure
I
know myself’
I
said walking
Slowly
towards him.
XVIII (B)
Slim
as a flute
Accompanied
by flames
And
muffled cries
I
wish I could say
I
grabbed the rifle
And
threw the bullets
Off
the balcony
Headlong
into
The
doorway
Sculpting
hope
From
the worst of misery
Packed
within sandwiches
Experimenting
in voices
In
miniature
Laced
in pessimism
Instead
Doubling over
The
balcony together
With
only one
Further
sentence spoke
‘This
is only the beginning,
‘This
is only the beginning’
Approaching Station 12
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
the wheels rolling down the track
seemed to repeat over and over and over
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
From deep in the shadows it watched and wondered
“Why was this man not seeing the peril approaching
Why hire supposedly safeties best security - if
He only sits and watches the comely women boarding and leaving
Following their every move inappropriately”
While - right in the snipers line of vision
The train approaches the train station
On the train
An innocent child is coloring in her mother's new mystery novel
A clown is selling balloons ahead in the next car
The right Father Henry reads to sister Ann about the apostle
Immigrants from far off India watch their new world out the window
The conductor strolls congenially down the aisle greeting all
“Station Twelve ahead.” He calls
And the wheels rolling down the track
continue to repeat over and over and over
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
The train lunged and shivered
As the vaporous shadow crystallized
Lunging to grab the cord above the guard's head
All business now the guard fights the spector
While the passengers cower in fright
And the train keeps rolling toward the station
The specter moans
Does anyone hear?
The guard has fought him off
He howls with frightful frustration
The sniper is wait---ing, wait--ing, wait -ting
Your doo-oomed , all doo-oomed
And the wheels rolling down the track
continue to repeat over and over and over
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
Tugging her mothers sleeve, she points him out
“Can’t we help him, he wants us to listen”
The little girl cries
While the immigrants hide between the seats
And father Henry holds up his crucifix
The clown rushes in and pulls the cord
Slamming the conductor to the floor
The train rolls into station 12
But no one feels the bullets when they come
All are safely hiding between the seats
The specter disappears into the air
His duty done
His little girl and wife will make it home
(clarice) 04/10/2015
Approaching Station 12
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
the wheels rolling down the track
seemed to repeat over and over and over
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
From deep in the shadows it watched and wondered
“Why was this man not seeing the peril approaching
Why hire supposedly safeties best security - if
He only sits and watches the comely women boarding and leaving
Following their every move inappropriately”
While - right in the snipers line of vision
The train approaches the train station
On the train
An innocent child is coloring in her mother's new mystery novel
A clown is selling balloons ahead in the next car
The right Father Henry reads to sister Ann about the apostle
Immigrants from far off India watch their new world out the window
The conductor strolls congenially down the aisle greeting all
“Station Twelve ahead.” He calls
And the wheels rolling down the track
continue to repeat over and over and over
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
The train lunged and shivered
As the vaporous shadow crystallized
Lunging to grab the cord above the guard's head
All business now the guard fights the spector
While the passengers cower in fright
And the train keeps rolling toward the station
The specter moans
Does anyone hear?
The guard has fought him off
He howls with frightful frustration
The sniper is wait---ing, wait--ing, wait -ting
Your doo-oomed , all doo-oomed
And the wheels rolling down the track
continue to repeat over and over and over
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
Tugging her mothers sleeve, she points him out
“Can’t we help him, he wants us to listen”
The little girl cries
While the immigrants hide between the seats
And father Henry holds up his crucifix
The clown rushes in and pulls the cord
Slamming the conductor to the floor
The train rolls into station 12
But no one feels the bullets when they come
All are safely hiding between the seats
The specter disappears into the air
His duty done
His little girl and wife will make it home
(clarice) 04/10/2015
Monday, 27 April 2015
Part XXVII
(Part XXVII is the start of the end and a final meeting)
XXVII
Overtaking
themselves
The
bullets sprayed
All over
the floor
Reconstituted
in screams
With
each shot
Dancing
to a private dance
Staining
chaos
Rotting
in the air
Offering
a different story
With
each death
In honey
eyed intent
Turning
violence into prose
Madness
into hope
All the
way
To the
top
And I
faced him
Face to
face.
Sunday, 26 April 2015
Part XXVI
(Part XXVI moving slowly and slowly towards the end game
is the Ghost and Michelle)
XXVI
Stalking
on victims
Alfloat
on imaginary highs
Swallowing
up their panics
Like a
vampire getting high
On
emoition
Pausing
for thought
In-between
each shot
For a
few seconds
Letting
them think
That was
it
And when
they moved
He shot
again
And
again
Shooting
some victims
Over and
over
And
puzzled
When
shooting one
Turning
back
A few
seconds
To
discover the body was gone
And was
stood there
Half a
metre up the platform.
Saturday, 25 April 2015
Part XXV
(Only 5 more poems to go. Part XXV is Andy pinned down by the sniper)
XXV
Treading
the boards
In a
subtle tease
Slicing
the truth
Chained
to the ground
Her
words tangled
Around
my thoughts
In wind
chimes
Gleaming
between
The
sunset
And the
edge
Of that
platform
Snapping
bullets
Around
me
Like an
invisible wall
Jolting
a distraction
Equivocatory
allowing me
To keep
ducking and diving
Between
bullets.
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