Even though the story is finished for this year, i am still getting submitting in which are simply too good quality not to use.
First up is returning friend Ananya S Guha who offers this excellent poem 'Uncle's Ghost'.
He sat Buddha like
shaven, ashen
he sat otiose, no looks
moribund, but sitting.
Me thirteen
me in myths and shrouds
me who knew ghosts
but hadn't met
me me me.
My eyes became a traffic snarl
I hid under the blanket
unmoved he stared, meditative
smiling, almost laughing
after all Buddha like
my first incursion to prayer,
sleep and oblivious meditation.
Buddha like. Ghost? Buddha was
dead centuries ago.
But now this Buddha, terrible, smiling
sitting at my supine feet. Incantation.
My anthropological uncle in
one of his excavations- digging!
Friday, 19 June 2015
Thursday, 30 April 2015
Part XXX Part A and B and guest poet 18 - Jeffarama!
(Last two pieces today. It's been a long
and eventful journey but has become apparent
to myself over the past few days that this story
is not over and hopefully health permitting,
there will indeed be a Ghost Story Part III
next month.
As a special afterthought which may lead into
Part III, my special buddy Jeffarama! (http://www.writeoutloud.net/profiles/jeffarama!)
has done a alternative ending
In the meantime, thanks for reading)
XXX (A)
Creating
a breaking sound
Your
words of agreement
Was
almost overturned
Then
unpacked
Into
the boot of a car
Blowing
on panes of glass
Resurrecting
itself
In
a verbal affirmation
Of
the truth
Translated
into a slight tear
‘It’s
only going
to
get worse
He
was just the first’
Vanishing
down the staircase
With
me in tow.
XXX (B)
Vanishing
across railway dust
Tranmissing
effects
Into
hand held mysteries
Shooting
down hopes
Freckled
into spots
Migrating
into different towns
Kicking
through other doors
She
said it was only going
To
get worse
Before
we even got
Down
the staircase
And
a few dozen deaths
Was
nothing to what was going
To
happen next
Shifting
answers
Into
another adventures
Before
surfacing again
At
the beginning of
Another
story.
Don't think that's the end of the matter...
Ironic really
the headline said it all
'Innocent commuters massacred'
Ironic as it was on the paper stall
outside the station
the atrocities happened
Not even a natural disaster
no, that may have been acceptable
but as usual, a complete waste,
a senseless loss of innocent life
What gives you the right?
to take my life
to cut me down in my prime
to dictate the day that I die...
I hope you get
everything you deserve
although it's nothing compared
to what I have in mind
Remember to watch your back
for the rest of your life
if you think you're being watched
those eyes are mine
My soul won't rest
Until I track you both down.
Jeff Dawson April 2015
Wednesday, 29 April 2015
Part XVIX A and B
(As said yesterday, in a attempt to keep this down to just April
I am now writing two poems a day.
The poems today follow straight on from Part 28.
Can you wait until the conclusion tomorrow? (with a special
epilogue wrote by our last guest poet too)
XXVIX (A)
Shut
close
Those
words followed me
Cresting
over the balcony
Into
a muffled deadness
Shelved
into blurred lights
With
his face staring
Into
my eyes
All
the way down
Thirsting
for blood
Leaving
footprint
After
footprint
In
my memory
Cutting
through my relief
With
an axe
Slipping
away
In
a broken lullaby.
XXVIX (B)
Ripping
up the tension
You
would have kissed me
If
you could and told me
I’d
be okay
Threading
away my pain
And
the blood
All
over my ripped jeans
And
trainers
Thickened
in
A
sharp transfer
Seeping
through
Drenched
in passion
As
much as
A
lingering sense of guilt.
Tuesday, 28 April 2015
Part XXVIII Part A and B and Guest Poet 17 Stormy Gail Dormire - Approaching Station 12
(The people who know me better may remember
it's my birthday today but still no stopping me
on Napwrimo. As previously hinted, there will
be extra pieces to help me finish off the story
and I can now confirm from today for the last three
days, there will two poems per day. Talk about
making life harder for myself - lol. Today's poem
is Andy with the killer finally meeting)
(Also included is our latest guest poem from Stormy Gail Dormire
who offers Approaching Station 12 directly set in this world)
XVIII (A)
Broken into pieces
He
pumped shell after shell
Into
the spaces
Round
the doorarch
Above
me
Spraying
it so much
It
looked like
He
was redecorating
Rather
than trying to kill me
Screaming
‘Die, Die, Die’
With
such force
It
sounded like
He
was trying to will me
To
death
When
the bullets didn’t
Losing
the thrill
When
he kept pumping
Them
out
And
none of them hit me
Before
proclaiming
Eventually
‘How?’
‘I’m
not sure
I
know myself’
I
said walking
Slowly
towards him.
XVIII (B)
Slim
as a flute
Accompanied
by flames
And
muffled cries
I
wish I could say
I
grabbed the rifle
And
threw the bullets
Off
the balcony
Headlong
into
The
doorway
Sculpting
hope
From
the worst of misery
Packed
within sandwiches
Experimenting
in voices
In
miniature
Laced
in pessimism
Instead
Doubling over
The
balcony together
With
only one
Further
sentence spoke
‘This
is only the beginning,
‘This
is only the beginning’
Approaching Station 12
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
the wheels rolling down the track
seemed to repeat over and over and over
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
From deep in the shadows it watched and wondered
“Why was this man not seeing the peril approaching
Why hire supposedly safeties best security - if
He only sits and watches the comely women boarding and leaving
Following their every move inappropriately”
While - right in the snipers line of vision
The train approaches the train station
On the train
An innocent child is coloring in her mother's new mystery novel
A clown is selling balloons ahead in the next car
The right Father Henry reads to sister Ann about the apostle
Immigrants from far off India watch their new world out the window
The conductor strolls congenially down the aisle greeting all
“Station Twelve ahead.” He calls
And the wheels rolling down the track
continue to repeat over and over and over
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
The train lunged and shivered
As the vaporous shadow crystallized
Lunging to grab the cord above the guard's head
All business now the guard fights the spector
While the passengers cower in fright
And the train keeps rolling toward the station
The specter moans
Does anyone hear?
The guard has fought him off
He howls with frightful frustration
The sniper is wait---ing, wait--ing, wait -ting
Your doo-oomed , all doo-oomed
And the wheels rolling down the track
continue to repeat over and over and over
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
Tugging her mothers sleeve, she points him out
“Can’t we help him, he wants us to listen”
The little girl cries
While the immigrants hide between the seats
And father Henry holds up his crucifix
The clown rushes in and pulls the cord
Slamming the conductor to the floor
The train rolls into station 12
But no one feels the bullets when they come
All are safely hiding between the seats
The specter disappears into the air
His duty done
His little girl and wife will make it home
(clarice) 04/10/2015
Approaching Station 12
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
the wheels rolling down the track
seemed to repeat over and over and over
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
From deep in the shadows it watched and wondered
“Why was this man not seeing the peril approaching
Why hire supposedly safeties best security - if
He only sits and watches the comely women boarding and leaving
Following their every move inappropriately”
While - right in the snipers line of vision
The train approaches the train station
On the train
An innocent child is coloring in her mother's new mystery novel
A clown is selling balloons ahead in the next car
The right Father Henry reads to sister Ann about the apostle
Immigrants from far off India watch their new world out the window
The conductor strolls congenially down the aisle greeting all
“Station Twelve ahead.” He calls
And the wheels rolling down the track
continue to repeat over and over and over
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
The train lunged and shivered
As the vaporous shadow crystallized
Lunging to grab the cord above the guard's head
All business now the guard fights the spector
While the passengers cower in fright
And the train keeps rolling toward the station
The specter moans
Does anyone hear?
The guard has fought him off
He howls with frightful frustration
The sniper is wait---ing, wait--ing, wait -ting
Your doo-oomed , all doo-oomed
And the wheels rolling down the track
continue to repeat over and over and over
Go back, Go-ooo Back, go back, go-ooo back
Tugging her mothers sleeve, she points him out
“Can’t we help him, he wants us to listen”
The little girl cries
While the immigrants hide between the seats
And father Henry holds up his crucifix
The clown rushes in and pulls the cord
Slamming the conductor to the floor
The train rolls into station 12
But no one feels the bullets when they come
All are safely hiding between the seats
The specter disappears into the air
His duty done
His little girl and wife will make it home
(clarice) 04/10/2015
Monday, 27 April 2015
Part XXVII
(Part XXVII is the start of the end and a final meeting)
XXVII
Overtaking
themselves
The
bullets sprayed
All over
the floor
Reconstituted
in screams
With
each shot
Dancing
to a private dance
Staining
chaos
Rotting
in the air
Offering
a different story
With
each death
In honey
eyed intent
Turning
violence into prose
Madness
into hope
All the
way
To the
top
And I
faced him
Face to
face.
Sunday, 26 April 2015
Part XXVI
(Part XXVI moving slowly and slowly towards the end game
is the Ghost and Michelle)
XXVI
Stalking
on victims
Alfloat
on imaginary highs
Swallowing
up their panics
Like a
vampire getting high
On
emoition
Pausing
for thought
In-between
each shot
For a
few seconds
Letting
them think
That was
it
And when
they moved
He shot
again
And
again
Shooting
some victims
Over and
over
And
puzzled
When
shooting one
Turning
back
A few
seconds
To
discover the body was gone
And was
stood there
Half a
metre up the platform.
Saturday, 25 April 2015
Part XXV
(Only 5 more poems to go. Part XXV is Andy pinned down by the sniper)
XXV
Treading
the boards
In a
subtle tease
Slicing
the truth
Chained
to the ground
Her
words tangled
Around
my thoughts
In wind
chimes
Gleaming
between
The
sunset
And the
edge
Of that
platform
Snapping
bullets
Around
me
Like an
invisible wall
Jolting
a distraction
Equivocatory
allowing me
To keep
ducking and diving
Between
bullets.
Friday, 24 April 2015
Part XXIV
(Part XXIV is a poem of trust between Andy and Michelle
moving further and further into the end game coming soon)
Just
trust me
Her
words followed me
Out of
the newsagent
Just
trust me
With
cold black eyebrows
Drifiting
in and out
Of the
shadows
Just
trust me
And let
me draw his fire
Let me
draw his fire
While
you sneak in
Behind
him
‘even I
can see
that’s a
plan
out of
Scooby Do’
I said.
‘I’ll
probably get shot
before I
am even
halfway
across
the
platform’
How I
didn’t even know
To
this day.
Thursday, 23 April 2015
Part XXIII and Guest Poet 16 - Meshach R. Brencher - Kiss the knife -
(Part XXIII covers another conversation between Michelle and
Andy moving slowly and slowly towards the end game.
Our 16th guest poet is our returning friend, Meschach R Brencher
from with the second of two poems)
Biting at my ankles
Edged
membrane grey
Cluttering
across your
Every
word,
Smouldering
Before
snapping shut
Streetlight
yellow
‘You
have no choice
Andy’
Spooned
into my emotions
‘All
hell is breaking loose’
‘I don’t
understand you’
thread
inside out
‘This is
just the beginning of the end’
Inbetween
bullets
Riding
up and down
The
corridors
Inbetween
seams of dust
Contradicting
itself
Worse
than memory.
Kiss the knife
That bleeds your soul
Dark vines have a sharp
touch
Water running down
From the river
I sink underneath
The sail ship dancing
figures around
Where I cross the harbour
While the horizon floats me
in vain
Among cold feelings
Where my destination has no
arrival
Entangled in heavy vessels I
cannot escape
Forgotten like the ship
anchors
The pier watching sunset
As I close my eyes shut
Darkness the only requiem
As the light has no purpose
To see what cuts deeply in
me
Is so far away
Transparent and loathing
For eternal twilight
Sucked away by the wind
I cannot feel you
But your spirit will never leave meWednesday, 22 April 2015
Part XXII and Guest Poet 15 - Meshach R. Brencher - Dark Matter
(Part XXII moving straight on is a conversation
just before the action begins between Andy (the
narrator) and Michelle (Ghost))
(Guest Poet 15 is a young poet I have known
for a few years called Meshach R Brencher
who delivers the first of two very clever poems
which although not in Ghost Story II are very
worthy pieces in their own right)
(More of his work can be heard here and here
or read here)
XXII
Bearing the weight of the killings
Something
unseen left
Wet
marks on glass
Screwed
up across soaked
Wrapping
paper
And
burst fountain pens
Scratched
across the magazines
She said
Tumbling
all around her
Cradling
her fears
Enfolded
across
An ocean
of assumptions
tellingthe
reporters
trapped
in no-mans land
before I
picked her up
sailing
around a argument
littered
with rhetorical rockets
she said
more than once
hurry up
before more are killed
more are
killed.
Dark matter
Shields translucent energy
The surface has nowhere to
gravitate
Unquenched lips
Hungry with no purpose
Plunge into liquid that soon
evaporates
Into thin air
The vacuum shift terminated
By application of a voltage
Malfunctioning the process
to
Extinguish the flames
Not being present to be
aware
Of a deficient state
Failure to attend to
What was expected
A moment that passes you by
Without witnessing a
creature
Cradled in a sleepy state
While being investigated
about its
Disappearance
With broad coverage on so
many stories
Never told which don’t ever
see
The light of day
Tuesday, 21 April 2015
Part XXI
(9 Poems to go and there is still so much to discover
including things to discover for myself.
Part XXI is again from the eyes of the killer)
XXI
Smoking
buttons
Hectic
in broken gasps
Calculating
in incidental music
Stealing
past his nerves,
Master-like
with his rifle
Hardly
moving
Through
her valley of abuse
That
still laced his ears
Driving
faster and faster
Until he
pulled in
Drawing
aside that door
That led
onto the roof
Startling
himself
With
each shot fired
Looking
for her love
With
each hit scored
Leaving
the artist behind
In
a matter of moments.
Monday, 20 April 2015
Part XX and Guest Poet 14 - Martin Elder - Once Upon a time
(Part XX already. Phew.. Part XX covers our old friend the cleaner
who like the police inspector from Part XIX knows more than he
also reveals)
(Our 14th guest poet is a gentleman I know from Write Out Loud
Stockport (A open mike night I regularly attend called Martin Elder.
A great bloke with a even better sense of humor. With this poem doesnt'
display his humour, this is a powerful skillful poem which I hope you
all will like also)
XX
Hidden out of sight
Peering
across the tracks
Opening
up his bucket
Like an
umbrella
Broken
into a concave shape
Mopped
into silence,
He saw
first the killer
Then me
Descending
slowly
Like
falling leaves
Over the
platform
Clustering
at the edge
Shining
nerves
Passing
the barrier
Not
releasing
It was
designed
To keep
everybody out,
Separated
only
To
the point of rescue.
Once upon a time (Martin Elder)
Once upon a time
There was you and there was me
Lost forever
In a place we called home
We would pretend
It was ours
The big house
Where others lived
But we could declare
To nobody else
It was ours
I was King and you were Queen
Like all good children
Heard but never seen
We ruled in our very own
Palace
It was our
Stately chalice
The holy grail of
Our life together
Forever young, carefree
Summers hot
Winters cold
Toasting by a fire
How we danced
So very bold
By day and by night
Until that day
A dance to close
Your dress caught
Alight
Two souls trapped
In a place
That turned from palace
To prison
overnight
Never allowed to grow up
We did not know the difference
Between dark and light
The smell of burning still
Remained
Our skin a pale white
Charred and blackened wood
Escape seemed impossible
The burning, smouldering flesh
Tormenting
A hundred years or more later
We walked danced and ran
Down corridors
Through walls and doors
Only ever seen by cats and dogs
And an occasional brave child
Confronted with the tired eyes
And flesh ridden sores
But now the house is gone
Knocked down
And turned to grass
With only a plaque to remind
Of the fateful day
And so we are free
At last
You and me
To become sprites of the day
Dancing across field and hedge
Free to wander and to find
Our own way
Far, far away
Once upon a time (Martin Elder)
Once upon a time
There was you and there was me
Lost forever
In a place we called home
We would pretend
It was ours
The big house
Where others lived
But we could declare
To nobody else
It was ours
I was King and you were Queen
Like all good children
Heard but never seen
We ruled in our very own
Palace
It was our
Stately chalice
The holy grail of
Our life together
Forever young, carefree
Summers hot
Winters cold
Toasting by a fire
How we danced
So very bold
By day and by night
Until that day
A dance to close
Your dress caught
Alight
Two souls trapped
In a place
That turned from palace
To prison
overnight
Never allowed to grow up
We did not know the difference
Between dark and light
The smell of burning still
Remained
Our skin a pale white
Charred and blackened wood
Escape seemed impossible
The burning, smouldering flesh
Tormenting
A hundred years or more later
We walked danced and ran
Down corridors
Through walls and doors
Only ever seen by cats and dogs
And an occasional brave child
Confronted with the tired eyes
And flesh ridden sores
But now the house is gone
Knocked down
And turned to grass
With only a plaque to remind
Of the fateful day
And so we are free
At last
You and me
To become sprites of the day
Dancing across field and hedge
Free to wander and to find
Our own way
Far, far away
Sunday, 19 April 2015
Part XIX and Guest Poet 13 - Hazel Connolly - Ghost II
(Moving on Part 19 - this piece tells the story
from the eyes of the Police Inspector who as you will
discover knows more than he reveals to the reporter.
Also is our latest Guest Poet, the 13th one is a lovely
lady called Hazel Connolly who has submitted a sequel
poem to the one she wrote last year herself. That itself
can be read here and more of her work can also be read
here)
Swollen
with nerves
Scaled
around the outskirts
Of what
he had just reported
The
police inspector
Spent
the next 10 minutes
After
his interview with the press
Panting
with breath,
Fathomless
in his guilt
Covered
in a paused sweat
Lighting
cigarette after cigarette
Like a stale perfume
Fragile
in increasing nerves
Out
wearied across the stars
Until a
colleague joined him saying
‘Did
they buy it, sir?
To which
he answered
'I know I wouldn't.'Ghost II (Hazel Connolly)
When I returned to the crossroads
To meet this raven haired ghost,
Lost in thoughts
I stared at the madness
Lurking in the darkness before daylight
All around the shadows gather.
Then, your ruby red lips
Brushed against my cheek
In a strange haze of shock
I call your name..
Again you are gone.
A cascade of tears
Falls down my face
You came and taunted..
I only wanted to say goodbye.
While deaths shadows
Loom over me
I’m drowning in sadness
My broken heart crying
While searching dark
Shadows in the night
I know now,
You are a child of the moon
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